I have written two hundred pages of this novel from the two female main characters’ points of view, but the husband keeps trying to talk. I have written several scenes now that feel incomplete and I think what is missing is Seth’s voice. He is very annoying that way. It would be so easy to just hate the guy, but I can’t. The poor man has motivations of his own. He has an axe to grind too.
So what does this mean for the novel as a whole. Can I go back in the next draft and drop a few scenes from his POV in? Could it possibly be that simple? I fear not. I have a niggling feeling I am in for some serious rewriting. Again.