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Yesterday’s post was about Lara, the main character of How To Climb The Eiffel Tower. Today I want to tell you a bit about Lara’s mother. She doesn’t deserve that title, but it feels strange to call her Lara’s maternal host. She certainly didn’t deserve a name. Throughout the novel, she is always referred to as “Mama.” I toyed with Lara having a snarky nickname for her, but decided she didn’t merit that much effort on Lara’s part.
A little backstory on Mama, most of which never made it into the final drafts of the novel. Mama had a comfortable childhood in the mountains of North Carolina. Her parents were good, churchgoing folk. Her father was a mineralogist for several asbestos mines and her mother was a social worker. She broke her parents’ hearts when she ran off to Nashville as a teenager and returned a few years later with a two year old Lara. She then disappeared from Lara’s life for six years and didn’t return until her parents could no longer care for Lara due to their failing health. When Lara’s grandmother died, Mama refused to take Lara back to North Carolina for the funeral. When her grandfather died a year later, Mama didn’t bother to tell Lara. Mama could not hold down a decent job or provide a decent childhood for young Lara. When Lara was a teenager, Mama married Dale Clemmons and things went for bad to worse. . . . I don’t want to give away too much of the plot, but suffice to say, Mama made some very poor decisions regarding Lara that could have saved Lara much suffering.
For a character that never actually appears in the action of the story, Mama is a very important character in the novel. Can you think of any physically absent characters in other novels that affect the plot?
The cover for How To Climb The Eiffel Tower will be officially revealed on May 1, 2014
I’m so excited, that I am giving away an Advanced Reader Copy of the book along with a small Eiffel Tower charm (you’ll understand why once you read the book). Visit my Facebook author page or clink on the link to enter now – Cover Reveal Giveaway
THIS POST IS PART OF THE BLOGGING FROM A TO Z CHALLENGE. FOR THE 2014 CHALLENGE, I WILL BE HIGHLIGHTING BITS AND PIECES OF RESEARCH AND BACKGROUND ON MY UPCOMING NOVEL, HOW TO CLIMB THE EIFFEL TOWER. PLEASE CLICK HERE OR ON THE BADGE TO THE LEFT TO SEE THE HUNDREDS OF OTHER PARTICIPATING BLOGS.
doreenb8 said:
I write nonfiction and actually have a Mother in my first book that is only mentioned anfew times but you just know her and her evilness are there.
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Noelle Granger said:
This is a great writing technique- will tuck this one away for future use!
Sammy D. said:
Some people should not become parents. Yet, remarkably despite neglect and abuse, many children endure, escape, become healthy successful adults and parents themselves. Humans can be resilient, although sadly some never overcome those parental abuses. Mama is a colorful character. I will be curious to see how she leaves her mark on Lara.
Vikki Thompson said:
Sorry I’ve not popped in before now honey…so many blogs so little time 😦 LOVE your posts! Good luck with the rest of the challenge…exhausted yet? lol xx
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melissajanda said:
These types of characters can be difficult to write, but so necessary for the conflict in the story. The nastier they are the more invested we become in the heroine’s plight. Sounds like you’ve got the ingredients for a wonderful story.
In the real life story that my first novel is based on, both of the parents were neglectful, which resulted in the death of the younger sister. When I wrote my story based on it, I had a hard time making both parents bad. I wanted someone to love them! So I only made the mother neglectful, but only after her husband died.
Elizabeth Hein said:
It is hard to leave a character with no one to love them. It breaks your heart.
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